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Decent Character Reviews: Violet the Hedgehog
Character Design - 5 - Though I usually don't like people using hedgehog characters, I do like her design and her clothing, I do like clothing that are simplistic but yet can still look great.
Personality - 8 - Nothing much on her personality, seems pretty straight forward
Backstory - 3 - For one thing, her backstory seems too unforgiving and doesn't quite fit with her personality. Another thing is I have no idea where she trained, how she got around during the training or how her training caught the eye of Sonic and the others. Maybe include something like her being endanger while Sonic was strolling around, or maybe have her empower man
Decent Character Reviews: Ajatar the Raiden-sama
Character Design - 7 - So, what I’m getting at is that this character is a thunder beast of some kind. It is somewhat hard to tell if it is a “raiju” unless stated otherwise, thought it does fit the description of one. Besides that I somewhat enjoy the characters design and color selections. I also enjoy her outfit, From her Ear ring to her shoes.
Personality - 5 - not sure what mental excellence means. And a lovable personality already has other personality traits in it, its either you use the other personalities in it or go with something else. Maybe replace it with Affectionate or Generous. Besides that it seems good.
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Random Argument 5
What kind of live would you like to live:
A life with complete freedom but with many backlashes from everyone you know or don't know, knowing fully well that it might even kill you quickly and in an instant,
or a life where you conform to everyone else's standards and will remain safe until death but not having any form of freedom at all, but don't care about what happens at all as long as you're safe.
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