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How can you ask for a commission?
All you have to do is:
1) Head to my profile
2) click on the "Give" button on the top right hand corner
3) Click on "Give Points"
4) Enter the total amount of points that you are spending
5) Specify what character(s) you want me to draw, what deal you want (Simple (1:1 or 4:3) or Detailed (1:1 or 16:9)), and include what extra deals you want in the message box.
6) Click on "Give" and I will be hard at work!

SIMPLE (1:1 or 4:3 aspect ratio)
Chibi Krios by gunray10
WILL ADD SHADING FOR FREE
2 POINTS= Will draw your character 
1 extra POINT= Will add a simple scenery
1+ extra POINT(S)= 1 point per extra character
MORE DETAILED (1:1 or 16:9 aspect ratio)
Krios - See you later, Summer. by gunray10
MORE DETAILED (1:1 or 16:9 aspect ratio)
WILL ADD SHADING AND AMBIENCE FOR FREE
4 POINTS= Will draw your character
2 extra POINT= Will add a detailed scenery
3+ extra POINTS= 2 points per extra character

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gunray10
Chris Avlis
Artist | Hobbyist | Other
United States
gunray10 Icon by gunray10


Age: 17
Birthday: April 7
Gender: Male
Location: United States ,California
Interests:
 Music Genre(s):Techno,Rock,Jazz
  Game Genre(s):Strategy,Fighting,Rhythm
   Others(s):Anime,Drawing,Nostalgia,Trombone,Spriting
    Friend(s):
     :iconneonaurasphere::iconakatsukistudios9::iconcyberblade99x::icondfreak22::iconyoshiwaffle::iconpokeangel123::iconilluminyghty::iconmakashu::iconn810l3::iconcupid1992::iconjuliet-gwolf18:


User Names In Games:
random Osu stamp by hissatsugirl: Gunray10
[Stamp] ROBLOX by Counterclockwork: Gunray10
Steam Stamp by badtrane: Dj 3gg♩♬
Minecraft Stamp by kimbo2450: DJ_3gg
YuGiOh stamp by prosaix Dueling Network: XxKeyboardxx
Brave Frontier Stamp by iJemz: 2205871341
Super Smash Bros 3DS Stamp by GameAndWill: 2664 - 2787 - 5045



My time so far... by gunray10




Wacom User :stamp: by Amblygondigital-artists stamp by CookiemagiKI speak English by Tifa22I love drawing by muslmaPen + Paper Stamp by Mirz123Plants Vs Zombies Stamp (Animated Sprites) by gunray10agree to disagree stamp by SanguineJusticeSarcasm Stamp by tailfeatherStamp :: Vocaloid by u-sagiK-ON Stamp by KishiFishyPortal Stamp by Jeff2psycoGoogle Chrome User Stamp by jayjaybirdsnestDust: An Elysian Tail Stamp by BanditFlyGunter by Loki-is-a-slutLuigi Stamp by Irish-InvaderSTAMP Gumi Megpoid by The-Last-Fallen-Ange135. Jolteon Stamp by xLady-MizuArakune Stamp by taokyakyaKonata stamp by xselfdestructiveTorrent Leech by PatronaTorrent Seed by PatronaYou suck stamp by includeownNostalgia Critic Transition Stamp by Airenu-ishAVGN vs NC: Posing Stamp by FogrottenPatapon Stamp by ZombiDJPeacock by DennyVuQuachI talk to myself... by prosaixMusic helps me create OCs... by Riona-la-crevetteNomnom attack stamp animated by Sinister-StarfeeshCasshern Sins stamp by Chaotic--EdgeIts a waste of time by SoraRoyals77HollyWood Undead Stamp by kimbo2450luxray stamp by PFV0-StampSuper Smash Brothers Brawl Logo Stamp by moonprincesslunahare hare no yukai-stamp by HotaruAyanamiI Love Tetris by hope401DA Stamp - Video Games 01 by tppgraphicsI Heart Touhou Music Stamp by CyclopsHimeSTAMP: Cirno by mobbostampsKonata Izumi stamp by madleaineKona Asleep by King-ahHorns Stamp by YoshikuniShikuPSP: Stamp by JazzaXWii: Stamp by JazzaXSTAMP - Mr. Game and Watch by SpontaniousCombustioStamp: I love my OC(s) by Jeshika-HarunoMario Bros Stamp by ShinyZangoFav and RUN 3 - stamp by JWiesnerDo. Not. Blink. - stamp by LetsSaveTheUniverseAmethyst Stamp by LMsHangout

The STAMP by pyromancyKagami's dream by kyutenzukenAB11 Generation Stamp (Gunray10) by gunray10Mad Scientist Professor Utonium by TheTitan99












New Violet Sonic Boom by EvolWayz

Character Design - 5 - Though I usually don't like people using hedgehog characters, I do like her design and her clothing, I do like clothing that are simplistic but yet can still look great.


Personality - 8 - Nothing much on her personality, seems pretty straight forward


Backstory - 3 - For one thing, her backstory seems too unforgiving and doesn't quite fit with her personality. Another thing is I have no idea where she trained, how she got around during the training or how her training caught the eye of Sonic and the others. Maybe include something like her being endanger while Sonic was strolling around, or maybe have her empower many foes while sonic just decided to join in.
It just feels rushed to have her train this whole time and NOT feel remorse for what happened, anger toward who caused it, or fear for what will come to be, before or during the time she met Sonic. You can make her have friends, heck, you can even pair her with a canon character, but you either change her backstory to fit her personality or vise versa, heck, change both if you can. So if anything, explain more.


Environment - 4 - How everyone treats her seems too straight forward (then again, these are mostly canon characters we are talking about), either people like her or hate her.


Creativity - 4 - I do like how shes powerless, though I question how this could be of any help against Eggman or Metal Sonic. Also, name one person who likes being lied to or enjoys getting pestered.


Average - 4.8 - Though not harming anyone, you should really make massive changes to her backstory and add more variety to her environment. Also, don't use dislikes that apply to everyone. Though I did somewhat like her outfit and her personality is pretty straight forward.


Also, if I am missing anything in this review, you may tell me ONLY ONCE and I will change the review.

Ajatar the raiden-sama:. character ref by misty314++bubbles++ daily doodles::. by misty314

Character Design - 7 - So, what I’m getting at is that this character is a thunder beast of some kind. It is somewhat hard to tell if it is a “raiju” unless stated otherwise, thought it does fit the description of one. Besides that I somewhat enjoy the characters design and color selections. I also enjoy her outfit, From her Ear ring to her shoes.

Personality - 5 - not sure what mental excellence means. And a lovable personality already has other personality traits in it, its either you use the other personalities in it or go with something else. Maybe replace it with Affectionate or Generous. Besides that it seems good.

Backstory - 3 - All I got from this is that she makes thunder storms and the person who had a hand in the birth to her is evil. (BEST STORY EVAR, 10/10 WOULD READ AGAIN)


Environment - NA- Could not find ANYTHING about interactions


Creativity - 6 - I do like the idea of controlling lightning and shape shifting, though I question why you placed in Demonic Powers and Shadow Manipulation on a lighting beast.

Average - 5.25 - Not bad, but not good either. Yes, your character does a great design and awesome powers, but you really should describe more with your backstory, I literally scavenged almost your whole gallery for an answer and I got nothing. You should also fix your characters personalities aswell.


Also, if I am missing anything in this review, you may tell me ONLY ONCE and I will change the review.

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:iconsusanstarrynightstar:
Susanstarrynightstar Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Hey gunray?
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:icongunray10:
gunray10 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
yes?
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:iconsusanstarrynightstar:
Susanstarrynightstar Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Could i ask you something?
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:icongunray10:
gunray10 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
sure, what?
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CelineDGD Featured By Owner 6 days ago

Hellow there random deviant. :) *clicked the random deviant button* Just want to spread the love. :)

You are beautiful and worth it, no matter what people say. <3

Have a hug too. :hug:
Don't be afraid to pass this on if you want. :)

And have a nice day/evening/night. :3

Sincerely, CelineDGD
Happy Helper of the Happy-Squad

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